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Very happy with the way this is progressing.
Tim Land is working his magic.
My notes to him are as follows:
I'd like the parliament 'order' shout to repeat, but later, muffled and distant, as if heard from the depth of the sewers.
The Music hall section feels like it needs much more time to unfold, it's a little abrupt. I would extend the dissonance of the orchestra tuning a little and give things more time to overlap.
When the flame is burning, I think it would be lovely to hear faint gusts of audience laughter, and perhaps clapping - to suggest we are up in the theatre rafters, close to a limelight.
Generally - the cross-fades could be longer - which would the total track closer to 5:30 or even 6 mins.
As you say, the explosion is unnecessary, needs to find its way back to the beginning.
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